It's hard to tell which screenshots are of the current project. If you can remove any that don't represent the current state, that would help.
In this particular one, I'd rather not try to be smart and turn this into a big sentence. The description should be very distinct from the revision and branch.
The revision and branch should be marked up better so that they look like labels in the forms of what we have for every other field. Consistency is important here.
