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    Update the "Creating Review Requests" documentation for the new hotness.

    Review Request #4717 — Created Oct. 10, 2013 and submitted

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    Update the "Creating Review Requests" documentation for the new hotness.

    I've rewritten all the documentation dealing with the new review request page
    to explain the new UI and the various workflows that it enables.

    Generated html docs and read through the new text a few times.

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    maybe reword to "To get the change into the repo", to make clear it's not always a change to Review …

    PU puiterwijk

    Should you really say this is a new feature? If you're in Review Board 5.0, this will probably still be …

    PU puiterwijk

    Which types of repositories? Maybe name them explicitely?

    PU puiterwijk

    I thought this was for creating a review request instead of "viewing"?

    PU puiterwijk

    "left-hand" side

    chipx86chipx86

    Maybe "configured on the server" instead of "connected?" I would also start "The first step" on the next paragraph, to …

    chipx86chipx86

    "Once ... first" sounds good. Maybe remove the "first."

    chipx86chipx86

    If we list the types of repositories, it'll easily grow stale. Let's just say that it's not available for all …

    chipx86chipx86

    "jump-to" looks odd here. "Jump To" would look better. If we had the icon showing up here, that'd be even …

    chipx86chipx86
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      maybe reword to "To get the change into the repo", to make clear it's not always a change to Review Board, but rather the code managed through a Review Board instance?

      1. It's not about committing to the repo, it's about posting the change. I'll work on the wording.

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      Should you really say this is a new feature? If you're in Review Board 5.0, this will probably still be here as nobody cleaned this up?

      1. I'll change it to use our versionadded macro.

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      Which types of repositories? Maybe name them explicitely?

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      I thought this was for creating a review request instead of "viewing"?

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      "left-hand" side

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      Maybe "configured on the server" instead of "connected?"

      I would also start "The first step" on the next paragraph, to help with scanning instructions.

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      "Once ... first" sounds good. Maybe remove the "first."

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      If we list the types of repositories, it'll easily grow stale. Let's just say that it's not available for all types of repositories.

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      "jump-to" looks odd here. "Jump To" would look better. If we had the icon showing up here, that'd be even better.

      1. I'll just say "an icon". It'll be obvious when people look at it.

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    chipx86
    1. Ship It!

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    Pushed to master (85040a4).